Few lines written for my wife couple of years back:
I wish my dear
to be so near
so that I can look at her
and take care
without any fear
O Almighty God!
It’s my prayer
never let her eyes filled with tear
And if you cant do so
just pass all those tears to me, right here.
Cheers,
Kamlesh
Copyright © Kamlesh Kumar
hi kam
acha to ye wali poem likh ke tum bhabhiji ko impress kiye…
this poem goes to my personal diary
kabhi kaam hi ayegi
aur apna copryright apne paas rakho
i will use it whneve i need it
coming to wht i do the best… ERROR-FINDING
“never let her eyes filled with tear”
replace “filled” with “fill”…
now i know kaise acha bhala insaan shayar bun jata hai
njoy
urs almost forever
mowgly
Thanks Mow,
I guess I need to put a sign to protect my copyright also. Anyways you are always welcome to use it provided you come with a result
. About the correction, whats written is written. A poet can surpass any barrier to express his feelings including grammar. Hope you wont mind.
Cheers,
)
Kam (Liked It
sunte hain ki
mil jati hai
har chij khuda se
wo kyun nhi milta
jise manga tha khuda se…
will surely use ur poem man, whenever i get what i pray for.
well one more thing:
“pari”, pari hai,
to wo mere paas kyun Ayegi
chalo hasrat hai
to kya pari mil jayegi
but i will try of course…
urs Almost Forever
Mowgly